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Open Poetry #13

Angst and Paranoid Collections of My Senses

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-03-26 12:19 PM

Night again invades my dreams,
Softer simpler seemly things.
Churns the ache of anger near,
Promise turns to unknown fear.
Ignore the pain your need impacts,
Trust deceit you can relax.
From finer words to deeper draws,
Deception soaks your ink soaked claws.
I've never tracked the way you speak,
But now in tune to lovers' weep.
Bend this now, this truth enfolds,
Running away as we both are told.
Hastily me you stow away,
Secret private, yours today.
I cannot bear the way you look,
Through me as your love you took.
So dry my eyes again, you'll see,
I've not a heart left to deceive.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-26 12:21 PM

very powerful write......

SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-26-2001).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-03-26 01:06 PM

wow. . . full of power. . .

the words jump out at you. . .

excellent. . .

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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-09 07:26 PM

This is very powerful temptress. I love your work!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-09 07:40 PM

Haunting in many ways. Deceit is never an easy pill to swallow for any of us. Well done.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-04-09 07:58 PM

This had a sonnet like quality to it!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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