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Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-04-18 01:57 PM

Doubting myself in a world of doubt.
Loving two people I can not live without.

One I could never have, you see.
Remains a part of my loving memory.

And while in the arms of one.
Thinking of another and feeling alone.

Commitment to the physical.
Dreaming of the emotional.

Wondering why two in one can not be.
Your captivating thoughts captured in memory.

And though emotional loves' door remains closed.
My heart to you is open and transposed.

[This message has been edited by Gemini (edited 04-18-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-18 02:31 PM

I think we all have had those thoughts at one time or another.

Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

2 posted 2001-04-18 02:54 PM

Thank you Interloper for reading and responding. I appreciate.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-04-18 03:14 PM

There's so much of me in here that it startled me---I guess this is more common than I thought--but it sure FEELS uncommon.
Thank you.

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

4 posted 2001-04-18 03:22 PM

I enjoyed this one, thanks! AP

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2001-04-18 04:40 PM

I totally understand this one. At least my interpretation. Totally feel this.

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

6 posted 2001-04-18 06:03 PM

Serenity-So glad you stopped by to read, glad you understand, it makes me feel less alone. Thank you.

AgustP-Appreciate that you liked.

Poetic Knight-Thanks for understanding and feeling. After reading your last poem, me thinks we're kind of on the same wave length.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-04-19 12:40 PM

One I could never have, you see.
Remains a part of my loving memory.

And while in the arms of one.
Thinking of another and feeling alone.
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Gemini... you write my hearts reflections and aches in more ways than you could ever know...
beautiful write of honesty..
and its so good to see your name here again.
glad your back.

take care
jm

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

8 posted 2001-04-19 02:29 PM

JM-Thank you for the read and your sweet reply.

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