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Rolling thunder / Greedy blunder (Earth Day bit)
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Rolling thunder / Greedy blunder (Earth Day bit) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Rolling thunder / Greedy blunder Fat corpulent overfed clouds sated beyond sated with voluminous vapors from steaming black soils. Fat corpulent overfed men sated beyond sated with sumptuous servings from steaming black ovens. Soils from grinding glaciers soils from verdant prairies mined over and over are cashed in by the kernel. Standing now in black monument in their thirst and in their hunger they feed the skies to rolling thunder they feed the thighs to greedy blunder. Krawdad |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
I liked it and think it is so true - I am sad to say. Nicely put together - loved the 'soils' throughout. Panne |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very well written. A very sad but true picture you give us. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Good, good, good! Well-written that is! The vivid descriptions are superb! Krawdad, you've done it again!!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Loved the comparison/contrast in this piece--very effective imagery e! I like your style! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Penna Brad VAS Serenity Thanks all for reading and for the compliments. (tho something less depressing would be more fun, no?) Krawdad |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Krawdad, this was way too cool to read. loved it. Parker |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Krawdad, this was way too cool to read. loved it. Parker |
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