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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-17 05:26 PM

The walls have been closing in on me
And the time seems to just melt away
Nothing will ever matter anymore
After my world has went away

Taking a moment of extreme indifference
With nothing left to say
The end can’t come soon enough
Waiting until my world goes away

Coming and going is all the same to me
As is different shades of grey,
Living and dying holds the same luster
Until my world has gone away

Everything I’ve ever done is turned to dust
No one I ever knew, ever stays,
I am left behind watching, waiting helpless
As my world goes away

So much gained to lose all at once
But I will remember this day
The day I lost it all and died inside
The day my world went away

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-17 05:28 PM

quote:
Coming and going is all the same to me
As is different shades of grey,

I often wonder at those who cannot see varying colors of gray, or those who only see in black and white....

and this, a heart's tug write...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-17-2001).]

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2001-04-17 05:56 PM

Thanks Sunshine, you seem to be the only one who sees all the shades of grey with me. I appreciate that.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-17 06:30 PM

If we don't see the shades of gray how are we to see anything else? Great one!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-17 06:30 PM

*sigh*. . . again PK, you echo what's in my heart. . . we'll get there my friend. . . some days are just longer than others. . .

thank you. . .

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Writer
Junior Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 21
CA/USA

5 posted 2001-04-17 06:47 PM

remember...gray is a mixture the colors!

I can always be distracted by love, but eventually I get horney for my creativity.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-04-18 04:54 PM

life is in degrees....never black and white.....too many variables not to see the shades of grey....I felt this

SEA

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2001-04-18 05:00 PM

I am so sorry that your world seems to have left you. Good poem though. Joyce

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