Open Poetry #13 |
Ribbon of Jet .................. [for Julian] |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ribbon of Jet sunflowers shall wave at ribbons of white lofting golden quilting green Julian still waves in little child delighting ribbons stream above lifts a hand to touch and imagination soars to fly back and forth so the dreams shall stream as ribbons wave at the thought poet’s ~ motion ~ flies |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This poem creates a brilliant atmosphere! I like it very much and think it is very intriguing! Truly appreciative ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Delightful!!! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this is beautiful.....I love sunflowers..... SEA |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
This is delightful! Not only is it written structually accurate, but total in its delight. I never fail to stop and watch a jet stream or a rainbow. ~Julian "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Simply a beautiful picture in my mind. Lovely poem. |
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