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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-04-11 10:21 AM

Walking the Night

I came to you
within the night
walked beneath
the moon’s
high lights
through the
fog, the mist,
the dark,

came to find
my inner
spark

came to find
my sweet’s
caress

came to find
my love’s
bequest

searched…

in shift so sheer
I felt no fear
I felt not cold
this love
made me bold
to come
and seek
through mist
to peek

to search….

through thicket
thick

through meadows
quick

saw fairies
flick

soft lights
at me

through dreaming
scheme

beyond moon’s
beam

ahead of the
dawn

I searched…

but all I
did, all
that got done

was a walk
in the night

for you
were gone

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 04-11-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-11 10:31 AM

You had only to follow the footsteps
left in the dew
And you would have found me walking about
searching for you.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2001-04-11 10:54 AM

Lady--so full of longing this search in the night...what a beautiful scene you painted though...quite like magic.

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

3 posted 2001-04-11 11:16 AM

Quiet magic - - your power with words - never ceases to astound me - Most lovely - (I'd NEVER - be gone)

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-11 12:53 PM

I've walked this many times Lady. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-11 01:04 PM

I really felt the longing in this poem, and it does not have to be night either does it? Great job, I loved this one.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

6 posted 2001-04-11 06:32 PM

I loved this one.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-04-16 10:57 PM

LadyInWhite~
How absolutely beautiful this is !

Felt the lonely search ...
felt the lonely path ...
felt ....

Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-04-16 11:02 PM

Yes, I agre with all the above..I loved the walk through your feelings

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2001-04-17 04:17 PM

I am so very glad that so many found this to be just to their liking. Thank you.

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