Tweaking......feeling silly

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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-04-16 07:01 AM

Tweaking

A penny for your thoughts, I wish!
They'd burn a hole in pocket twice
Please don't ask, too shy to say
The inside me, is melting ice.

My lips keep saying silent thoughts
Each purse of them, sends kisses, too.
Oh heaven help the one it reaches
Touches, mine, if they accrue.

Adding up in your possession
Held for ransom, deepest thoughts
Sighing on this rainy morning
Wondering why these feelings sought.

To myself, I think I'm speaking
You know, I am "feelings, tweaking".

*S Wyntersighs

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Agust P
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1 posted 2001-04-16 07:14 AM

beautiful poem! AP

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Member Rara Avis

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2 posted 2001-04-16 08:54 AM

Wonderful Wynter. Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-04-16 10:03 AM

Agust P
why thank you and here I thought it was a silly one..

Interloper
thank you also..I am glad you enjoyed huggzz

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Poet deVine

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4 posted 2001-04-16 01:39 PM

Sometimes, silly can be insightful too!! I liked this.

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-04-16 02:08 PM

I liked it too!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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serenity blaze
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6 posted 2001-04-16 02:29 PM

I count this among your best!!! Tweaking indeed....I love this, wynter! Great thoughts expressed in a great flow!

Sunshine

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7 posted 2001-04-16 02:40 PM

My mother had a favorite word - tweaking...

what wonderful memories you've bubbled up today!

Kicking Kim
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8 posted 2001-04-16 02:55 PM

Hi! Just letting you know that this is a great poem , you have a very great mind of which I am very jealous!! lol! Keep up the good work! Kicking Kim

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-04-18 06:35 AM

Sharon, I am  glad you enjoyed my bit of silliness..it was  a mixed feeling day for me

Kathleen, thanks, you are always so sweet

serenity
A little tweak her and a little one there can't hurt once in a while..thank you *s

Sunshine
well I am glad I gave you a thought of her this morning huggzzzz

Kim
glad you  enjoyed my  tweaking words today

and don't ever be jealous of me you would never want to be walking in my shoes at the moment..they are pinching me too much

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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