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“Oceans Wide and Mountains Tall”
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“Oceans Wide and Mountains Tall” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Please don’t be long… I don’t know if I can stand the wait… Just thinking of the love that we could make, Brings a lonely teardrop to my eye… I’m holding on… All I have are letters on the screen… Sometimes I wonder if it’s all a dream… But this is all I have and so I try… I try to keep my sanity, and lock my heart inside of me,,, But you found me and broke down every wall... And I will never understand, how you reached out and took my hand... Across the oceans wide, and mountains tall... So here I wait... I know there’s got to be a reason why... We met, I fell, now I can’t say goodbye... And neither one of us are free to leave... We have our lives... In seperate worlds apart we spend our days... We’re so connected, going seperate ways... All we can do is write, and then believe... I’d sell my soul to be with you... There’s nothing that I wouldn’t do... My heart cries out to answer when you call... And if you call me, I will try, to spread my wings...to you I’ll fly... Across the oceans wide, and mountains tall... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"ain't no mountain high enough ain't no ocean wide enough" to keep me from telling you - well done! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sunny, this is so sad and sweet. I love it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Reminds me of a song by Celine Dion, beautiful, Sunny just like you! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is a beautiful poem, with so many feelings written within. I hope to see you cross those obstacles someday. S |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
The last stanza is my favorite. There is such longing in every line. Great write.  |
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