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Open Poetry #13

On the Chin / You Win?

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

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0 posted 2001-04-16 02:27 AM

On the Chin / You Win?

If I take it on the chin
how does that translate to win?

If I think that must be smart
is it worth the cost - cold heart?

If I stay with pain, remain
won't my heart continue drain?

If I seek my happiness
must it be with your redress?

If I meet your dearest need
will you then to mine accede?

If I take my leave of you
will that choice my life renew?

If instead it's on the chin
how does that translate, you win?



Krawdad   4.16.01

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bslicker

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1 posted 2001-04-16 05:08 AM

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Kit McCallum

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2 posted 2001-04-16 05:50 AM

I love a good think, and you have many powerful ponderings here Krawdad, excellent! I really enjoyed this piece!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Krawdad
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3 posted 2001-04-16 01:41 PM

bslicker - Huh? Sorry, missed your post before you edited it.

Kit - Thanks for the "excellent". Glad you enjoyed this. The muse has been sullen of late . . . too much thinking, maybe?

Kraw'

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