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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sitting in my motel room Bored, not wanting to think, Went downstairs to the watering hole, And got myself a drink Over across the bar-room Where a young darling alone had sat, Came two bulky gentleman, (A nice way describing fat) I finished my drink, began to leave, The fat guys and lady then passed, I walked over to the table where she had been, Leaned over and touched her glass. Later I saw her in the pool, She didn't see me I'm sure, I envied the water's ability To totally cover her. [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 04-15-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Toe? Welcome home!...and, that's quite a thought! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If anybody could envy water, Toe, you could  Welcome home and happy Easter!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... thanks for the *grins* Toerag!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Interesting how you segue the thoughts of water from the drinking glass to the pool. Neat writing. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Me too, loved the association of the water glass, the pool and your "um hum lust?" Great story and wonderfully done  ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Good! [This message has been edited by inot2B (edited 04-15-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I remember this, Toe. A sweet one. Cor p.s. and I'm good, thanks, and you? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... and you didn't even mention sticking your toes in the water...  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ya think Nan would have erased the response I emailed to you? *EG* It sure is great to see your thoughts around here, Toe-man... and this is so gentle I can't even harass you for leering at the lady. *S* Great job! |
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