Open Poetry #13 |
I do not Paint I only Write |
Sunshine
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I do not Paint ~ I only Write I do not paint but by word of explanation I color your thoughts I pick up not a brush, but my quill and wash your soul with rainbows I have an eye for color, but no artistic bent to wend a lovely picture that you might gaze upon and fall into as Alice did but I do enjoy what color means knowing that purity, joy and glory await me in white fire, blood and charity are wrapped in robes of red truth and heaven I realize when looking up at blue skies understanding my affinity for my love of green, in the hope of eternal life, a rebirth of nature how purple really means sorrow and suffering and black, most significant, an absence of life so it is fitting today that I share with you, this lovely Easter morning how these colors and their religious symbolism come forth to meet you greet you welcome you remind you that I do not paint, I only write and I only write to leave you with a smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ kay - g t my smile ! Wh ps .... L k at that c l r ! Well, darn ... it's stuck t my pen ! L ved y ur p em ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,Sunshine,lovely poem |
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Sunshine
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Why Marge, that is probably one of your more colorful replies....LOL....are you sure you didn't borrow your palette from the Easter Bunny? Thanks, honey! Vandana...thank you so much for enjoying this with us! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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I disagree..you do paint with your words...and this is a very cool premise and inspire my dear poetess Happy Easter Sun In another life...I know I loved you then |
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Sunshine
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Janet Marie, I will allow you to disagree with me today....LOL....thank you for the Easter eggs, they are beautiful! |
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Martie
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"and I only write to leave you with a smile" Karilea....color me smiling! |
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Sunshine
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Martie! What is that scent you wear!? Oh yes,....CRAYOLAS! Thank you sweet one! |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Painting or writing, Sunshine, you are a true artist....and you always paint a smile here |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Sunshine, I thought this was nicely done, I enjoyed the read and am glad I came in here today...had no idea from your title that this would be Easter related but the surprise of it was a joy. Thanks, Panne |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well, Karilea, you know that I think very highly of you and your works of art. This, of course, was lovely, you certainly poured your heart and soul into it, so colour me ~Happy Easter Sunshiny One!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
But Karilea ... you do paint, and beautifully my dear. This piece is a wonderfully colorful work of art! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you do paint Sunshine. . . on the canvas of our hearts. . . wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Well ... I'm smiling ... you can take that pen and wash my soul, anytime |
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Sunshine
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'Deer, you sure about that? It's not just the chocolate rabbits you ate today that's got you on a sugar high?...Thanks! Panne...that's what Easter's all about...you open it up, and find what you didn't expect...thank you for reading... Melybee, so glad to have shared some smiles with you today... Ah Kit, so very glad that you enjoyed!... Sven, a wonderful comment....thank you! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is good. But I disagree you paint very well. |
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Sunshine
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Rex, somehow I think that smile is VERY big....thank you! Alan...so pleased that you came in to read this! Thank you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well Karilea van Sunshine, you sure paint pretty pictures in my heart with all that your write, and they are most are indelible, causing big smiles. Happy Easter sunny one! ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Ah Mysteria, you just keep those smiles coming back at me....and I'll do all I can to keep them on your face as well! Thank you! |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
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soooooo lovely |
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Denise
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This is so lovely, Karilea! You've given my heart many smiles! |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Lovely writing. I too know this feeling, of painting with my words. You speak so well for all poets. Lovely! "Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
But you do! You paint a portrait of smiles for all of us! Corinne |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kari, you paint the most beautiful words I have ever seen. Thanks for this. Sandra |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
well then - the solution is absurdly simple - since you write SO WELL - jUST KEEP WRITING - YOU'VE GOT ME SMILING |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful poem, Sunshiney one... well done! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You are still an artist, you write so artistically.. your words don't need an illustration to see their beauty. Keep doing what you do best! |
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Sunshine
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Goodness, I've lost track of who I need to thank.... so I will just thank you ALL....you make writing so very enjoyable! |
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