Open Poetry #13 |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia ![]() |
The world crumbles before me as the murdered call out for vengence and the starving Ethiopian cries out for even a crust of bread a girl cringes in the corner of her dark room terrified of the sound of her father's voice for her the night can't seem to end! The hollow empty shells looking for something to give meaning to their empty lives But words come easy to me Great poetic disertations and moving images flow freely but these can't feed the starving or avenge the dying or give meaning to the lifeless Have I become the very thing I hate? Waiting for change but sitting here doing nothing I feel paralyzed the dream is in my mind but my body can not complete it for lack of understanding What a tragic thing if all are like me! |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a good poem Brad, but we all have to start from where we are and encourage the next person to do his part. Perhaps you are meant to help with your words. Joyce |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
We can only make a difference in those around us in our sphere of influence. Lets begin with endeavoring to do the best we can do with just that much. None of us can change the whole world, but all of us, as grains of sand can unite to form a beautiful beach. This was so worthy a cry from the heart. I commend your heart for it's convictions. Each day step by step and person by person. God bless you! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Some may no not have your need to discourage suffering & some thrive on others lack social position.Lusting feverishly vain ambition. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Thank you for this very thought-provoking verse Brad. You made me examine aspects of my own life with this piece, very nicely written! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is so gut-wrenching.....all I can say is well done. Kathleen Blake |
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