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if words were colours
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if words were colours |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
If words were colours I'd splash them about I'd flick them at you I'd press my fingertips in thick globs I'd twirl my brush sadly through Mixing shades. Standing back to admire I'd ponder the reflections Mirrored in your eyes "Paint me " , you would beg. And I would...... In silvered gold. |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
wow. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ Oh, I like it ! Words are 'colors' ... aren't they ??  Heck of a paint job, artist ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
helen, i really like this, you are an artist |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
aw thank you both so much ..I am covered in paint ahhhhhhhhhh |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
thank you poem crazy ,you lovely one |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like this canvas. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Helen, this is such a fun poem! You are a talented poet and painter. (And you spell colour with a 'u'...so I like it even more! lol) Enjoyed this muchly ~Becky~ |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
I am a splash from your brush & feel surprise with every loving stroke you teach. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Helen, this is so wonderful! Take care, Melissa~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I love this! Great idea for a write. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Oh..really great....what is the color for me?...i also want to be colored by you...~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
Waseem you are the colour of moonlight on the sand ...you always disappear at my dawn |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oh i liked your title and your concept....unique and creative...i wonder why i never wrote such a piece before? |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very nice idea....brilliant writing! Nathan |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Helen...APPLAUSE! Such a treat. Bob |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
awwww Tracee your rainbow of words reminded me that we can paint a rainbow even at midnight |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow is right -- that was amazing. She said burn ... together. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! stunning piece! |
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