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A Love Intercession (I've written a dialogue)
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A Love Intercession (I've written a dialogue) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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A love intercession when that first kiss embraces all your senses Like a fragrant spring wind caressing ears, nose, tongue eyes and lips begun A wind of destiny whispers your name Kissed, I'm transformed remolded, recast, glowing signed with love's hallmark Despite me, the thoughts run rampant: WE run rampant as through fields of flowers I behold you and for the first time know the source of all I feel I want to lie within your arms feel you You are the butterflies in my stomach the honeydew on my lips the music of my heart The rain that falls softly upon the field touching me with every sweet thought I've ever held (The loved one responds) How deeply, warmly you've touched my heart do you think those butterflies are yours alone? despite the distance between us the soft rain falls on me too Its cool drops linger on my lips Tasting of the melon sweetness of your lips The field grass that caresses my body: Your hands The wildflowers kissing my cheeks: Your lips The breezes rustling the grass: I hear your words of love I melt into the soil My heart swells so I feel it will burst Through my chest As the ground embraces me (Your arms, your body) Cataclysmic forces unleashed, We are bonded united Pyrotechnic explosions Flow between us New flowers never seen sprout, bud, blossom Calmness never felt before seals the bond as we lie together We are one The first duty of love is to listen. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
absolutely beautiful in imagery and sentiment.... a lovely write, bill |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't you just love it when the two sides of one's brain holds such an interesting conversation!? Well done, Mr. Yeats! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Reading this...she knows how much she is loved |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
someone is blessed to be the object of your affections! Kay |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Sir. . . just wonderful!!  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
when replies like yours above come to ne - I am truly humble - thank you so much |
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