Fallen Comrade- Epitaph. Response to my Challenge

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Open Poetry #13

Fallen Comrade- Epitaph. Response to my Challenge

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

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Pickering, Ontario

0 posted 2001-03-25 03:00 PM

Fallen Comrade- Epitaph

He lays quietly, ex-police
Thirty years, in mayhems increase
No retirement, death is the release
Soul soars, and body slumbers in peace

Marina Mar. 25/2001

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It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-25-2001).]

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-03-25 03:00 PM

I like it....sad, but you did well on this one.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-03-25 03:02 PM

Very powerful Marina. . .

He will always be with you. . .

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coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

3 posted 2001-03-25 06:36 PM

Marina,
He is honored by your tribute.
Thanks.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

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