Open Poetry #13 |
Melancholy mists |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Melancholy Mists silver veil of mist tiptoes over azure waves melancholy night fog horn’s mournful cry silver mists on restless sea searching for the shore pale morning mist reaching for the blue above blankets sleeping earth Aloha with warmest regards, Koko Please Visit my new web-page http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I bow before you oh great html Queen, for this was simply a beautiful work of art! ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
silver veil of mist tiptoes over azure waves melancholy night ===================== such beautiful imagery in this collection of haikus.. love the graphic too well done poetess |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Mysteria: You are too funny my friend! heheh It did take me some work. i am not real swift at it. It looks simple enuff, but this is not that easy. I am pleased with the artful results to add a color to the poems. Of course i care most about the haiku itself as it stands.(big grins)I am pleased at having conquered a hard HTML lesson without classes.(pssst I used The HTML for Idiots book and still had a hard time...ROTFL! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Janet Marie: Thanks for your kind comment I do enjoy doing the haiku in a book series. smiles, Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Such lovely images in this lovely Haiku presentation. See you found out how to do that 'thang' ! You go, girl ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Koko, I've never read any of your poetry before, but after reading this lovely work, will certainly be looking for more. Michael Proust- |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!!! of course, I have a thing for lighthouses and misty waters and skies your poem is beautiful, too I'm going to send this address to my daughter so she can peek in, too. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Cheri, This is awesome, such beauty!!!! The first and the last haiku are my favs. What a unique presentation, see, I knew you could do it Take care, Melissa~ |
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