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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

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North Carolina

0 posted 2001-04-12 07:53 PM

I see your face, never erased, but always in memory,
I touch your eyes, so I may see through them,
Share in their oceans of blue,
I touch your lips, to understand the way to say
I love you,

I touch your ear, to hear the sweet nothings,
That my dear are always something.

I touch your dreams, so we may never be apart,
For in touching you, I touch your heart.

The greatest miracle of all,
Is when you touch me back.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-04-12 07:58 PM

all i can say is ooooooooooo yeah on that one

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-12 08:26 PM

yes, the response is everything

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-04-12 08:35 PM

YES! Well done! More!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-04-12 11:16 PM

I see your face, never erased, but always in memory,
I touch your eyes, so I may see through them,
Share in their oceans of blue,
I touch your lips, to understand the way to say
I love you,
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very romantic and softly sensual RB ..
laced with understated imagery,and whispered devotion.
perfect ending and title too
very nice write

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2001-04-13 12:39 PM

"For in touching you, I touch you heart." I loved this sweet and tender romantic piece. Nice work.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

6 posted 2001-04-13 10:55 AM

thanks WayoutWalt, glad yahhhh liked it!

Irish Rose, thanks I think so too!

Interloper, thank you, believe me this is one topic I never tire of

Janet Marie, thank you, In writing I try very hard for you to feel my words, so I'm glad you could touch them.

Thanks Michael so much, when I was writing this it came to me that if sometimes we could feel the way the other person was feeling, we would open our heart more.

juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

7 posted 2001-04-23 10:07 PM

really good poem ...........really deep meaning into it ..........

Coco
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since 2001-01-28

Posts 48

8 posted 2001-04-28 02:05 AM

hiya Rosebud, my goodness your poem is truly exquisite and it goes into my treasure box for many more readings...

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

9 posted 2001-04-28 02:15 AM

Definitely puts one in the MOOD. Very smooth.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

10 posted 2001-04-28 01:04 PM

thanks Juan, Coco, and Latin passion,
I do think sometimes we need that connection to really breath, and make that passion and know how the other feels.

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