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Still Missing You....
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Still Missing You.... |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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The pain is still fresh The tears still well up Sting my eyes Burn my throat To acknowledge That you are gone To admit Even to myself That you've left me Is something I don't do very well The ache of missing you Can be so overwhelming I have to force myself To think of something else Anything else As fast as I can Otherwise I hear your voice Your laughter And when that happens I fall to pieces I've felt you Known you were here With me Just watching Just being Just knowing I miss you I love you and I will always Always Need you No matter Where you are………… ~SEA~ *this is for my Aunt Sue* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I hear your voice Your laughter And when that happens I fall to pieces I've felt you Known you were here With me Just watching Just being Just knowing I miss you I love you and I will always Always Need you No matter Where you are………… =============================== this is a touching heartstring playing tribute to your namesake Aunt... and in time the tears that come with the memories that you fight.. will instead bring you comfort and smiles sincere and sweet poem Sea-girlie hugs jm |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow yuh thought it would be for a guy but yuh got the strong feelings here for family yuh i like |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
tender and heartfelt SEA. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
SEA - so achingly sad, and yet, try to remember that she is here with you in her way, in spirit, and find comfort there. Corinne |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely expression of love! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
An ache emits from these words. Well done, SEA. All writing comes |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ thank you Janet~ thank you...thank you for the hugs and understanding Walt~ she is and will always be, my hero Sven~ thank you Corinne~ thank you walker~ thank you LW~ thanks ~SEA |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very touching piece SEA. I'm sure she would love this |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
Caries a deep message . sad , yet comforting. Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Big hugs sent to hold you and your memories. I know these feelings of missing intimately~ By writing about her and sharing, you keep the memories alive. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
I love how you wrote it ....words tumbling painfully out |
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