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Did You, Do You?
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Did You, Do You? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Do you realize what you do to me every time that we touch? Did you ever think that someone could care about you so much? Have you ever believed that life could be so full of romance? With love were you ever willing to take this much of a chance? Did you ever realize that you were going to be "the only one"? Do you understand how much pain that you have undone? Do you know that I've loved you from the very start? Has it finally hit you that you have captured this poor girls heart? And do you know that if you do not believe these things to be true I'll do what ever it takes until I'm finally convincing you? On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I'm convinced that this great. Melton |
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painted lady Junior Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 48on the wing or nectaring |
Convince him, convince him, and don't let him forget! pl And then my heart with pleasure fills, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent GS!! I loved this one. . . the flow was wonderful. . . and it sounded excellent read aloud. . . Always tell them GS. . . never let them forget. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent write, GS... let's hope his heart listens... even if his hands are held over his ears! *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are very lucky if he touches you this way..some day I hope to feel the same about someone again..thank you, Donna for sharing ~Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Wow! This is awesome! I really hope he's convinced GS, I really do. Excellent write here, I enjoyed it immensly ~Becky~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Those last two lines could get you in trouble |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I have to agree with Irish Rose. Great poem! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Well expressed! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tell him each and every day, GS. The days are too prcious and life is too short not to tell things like this. All writing comes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you Melton. *s* I don't plan on letting him forget PL. Thanks. Vandana, I do enjoy. Thank you. *s* Sven, thank you for such lovely and kind words. I hope he never forgets. Suthern, LOL, I am praying his heart will always listen as it does now. I am sure that you shall M. And yes.....he truly does, every single day. *s* Thanks Becky for such an enthusiastic reply. I appreciate it. Rose honey, I guess that depends on what kind of troube it gets me into!! *w* Thanks. JLR, lol......and thanks. Thank you walker, appreciate it much. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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