Baudy bedfellow ... Senryu

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Open Poetry #13

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-12 02:46 PM

Baudy bedfellow
bedaubed bathos brought baggage
base belief barred

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-12-2001).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-12 03:02 PM

bad baggage behind
beliefs beckon bright beyond
bathos be banned, barred

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-13-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-04-12 03:55 PM

well I am learning new words today....

this is fun

SEA

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

3 posted 2001-04-13 01:37 AM

Again, a neat piece but missing a syl on last line. Sun's is missing a syl on last line too. But both are cool reads. Panne

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-04-13 02:18 AM

brave be badly blown
bathos bid begins boldly
bedaubed by breakfast

Loved what you did with the Senyru
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

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