Open Poetry #13 |
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Enigma |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
He is all things to everyone And nothing to none He is the bender of your will He is the only one He is one of his own kind But likes to lose his mind He is an enigma, a paradox He is the traveler in time He is full of laughter and light Yet thrives in the dark of night He is blindness to all He is the eyes to your sight He is hatred and love But none of the above He is the foot out the door He is the hand in the glove He is the good and the bad Of all mankind has had He is what you call free will He is all that is happy or sad He stands for peace through violence And loves the utter silence He is the one who is out loud He is sub-conscience |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a traveler in time....the subconscious... this is absolutely wonderful! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked how you did this and I liked where it went....great writing! ![]() |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! - well expressed, very thought-provoking!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
He is blindness to all He is the eyes to your sight some very good lines here Poetic Knight *s Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
This is excellent! You handled the rhyming well...something I am very jealous about. But I'm a good sport, so I will say well done. lol Liked it a lot ![]() ~Becky~ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
all and nothing someone and no one. . . excellent PK. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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