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Open Poetry #13

Elusive love (cinquain)

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-12 12:14 PM

True love
elusive love
where do you hide from me
in the dark recesses of my heart
I hope

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-12 12:20 PM

though sun
might shine pure bright
it would never disclose
those you keep with love the night
in dark

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-04-12 12:29 PM

I liked this one, and Sunshine's reply

SEA

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

3 posted 2001-04-13 02:10 PM

Well written.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-14 05:20 PM

where else would it hide??

wonderful. . . may we all find it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

5 posted 2001-04-28 09:26 AM

my heart is beating faster. Where do you hide? LP

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