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Open Poetry #13

Go On Ahead ( I Think I'll Sit Awhile )

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2001-03-25 10:43 AM

What marks to leave behind will say you've journeyed past this place ?
What crumbs when read will guide your thoughts should you need to return ?
Will they be-speak of wonder found once more when you retrace ,
or only dimly glow where once the light of promise burned ?

And those who follow on this path will they share your delight ,
or soon dismiss this wand'ring trial for lack of common ground ?
Will that which you have penned retain some measure of insight ,
or leave you groping blindly for what you'd percieved as found ?

Once did rush to find completion at end of ev'ry task .
Now seems there's more to bargain with of questions left un-asked .

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-03-25 11:12 AM

Enjoyed!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-03-25 03:48 PM

"Once did rush to find completion at end of ev'ry task .
Now seems there's more to bargain with of questions left un-asked ."

Stop and smell the roses while you can remember why.

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

3 posted 2001-03-25 09:36 PM

It is every writer's desire, to leave these illuminating crumbs. Seems to me, you're doing fine. (o: I enjoyed this very much, Doc. Thanks for it.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-04-05 10:50 AM

This is wonderful...indeed what is the legacy of our words? Yikes!!! I'd better not think about that one too hard!

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