Open Poetry #13 |
Confessions From The Darkness |
Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hey yall. this one is from my archives. i wrote this a few months back for a very special person and is still a very special person to me. but i never posted it. so here it is. tell me what yall think. confessions from the darkness i watch you from the darkness i see all of your tears all i want to do is hold you and take away your fears i can see all of you pain when i look deep into your eyes you try to put up your mask but i see through that disguise i know that you are hurting and i wish i knew what to do but you are 300 miles away and my arms cant huggle you i can hear the tremble in your voice whenever you speak his name you say that you should have never let your heart out and your taking all the blame but it wasn't your fault Hun you cant control your heart you cant hold back your feelings that you had from the very start i know cuz i have tried and i tried and tried again to not let my feelings take hold to not let anyone get close again but it never works in fact it just causes pain it tears us up inside and slowly drives our hearts insane i know that you are hurting now and i know you think that you love is through but just look into my eyes and you will know that is not true for i have always loved you even before we met and i will always love you please don't ever forget no matter what happens in the future a friend you will have in me i pray one day we will be together but i will just wait and see if it happens then i will be happy i will be floating on the air and it would have been the most beautiful person in the world that had put me there but if it doesn't then your friend i will always be always there to help you and hold you whenever you need me you have a beautiful soul and your eyes turn me to mush i can tell i am making you red cuz you always tell me to HUSHHHH well i have hushed to long i want you to know how i feel i want to show you how much i care and that i am for real i know it will take a long long time for you to mend your heart but when you do i wont be far behind for we are never far apart thank you for being my friend and thank you for loving me you have gotten me threw many a lonely night when there was no hope that i could see you touched my heart deeply and words can not show how much you mean to me and how i care about you so i know i am a long shot but sometimes long shots pay off big even the mightiest trees where once a lonely twig i know it will be along time before you can love again but just always remember that i am here my friend i know we can do it the chemistry is there but i know i will have to wait so I'll just sit back and stare at the most beautiful woman in the world and i mean that to be true one day i hope you can see in me what i see in you... Jesse C. Jaymz All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jesse~ This is a lovely piece from your heart ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"One day I hope you can see in me what I see in you." This is touching Jesse...lots of feelings and desires...James |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Beautiful chapter from your heart. May you always find your track and follow it to the end of a rainbow. ~Julian "I am not now that which I have been." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jesse, good to see you again. You have the biggest heart, my friend, and it is special when you share it. This was a love filled poem. Take care. Sandra |
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confetti Junior Member
since 2001-04-12
Posts 33 |
Friendships like this are so special. You're both very lucky. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Here's hoping that she sees this and knows what a wonderful friend she has, Jesse. I do hope your heart begins to heal soon though. You know my thoughts on this..Stand up for yourself. Heartfelt, my friend. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jesse, You already know how I feel about this poem.. it's beautiful. TaraB |
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Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
Very heartfelt and wonderful Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Marge: thank you and yes it did come from hte heart. *hugs* james: thank you my friend. i hope that one day she can see in me what i see in her. it would be a dream come true. thanks. Julian: thank you for the wishes of luck. i hope i find that too. sandra: my dear friend your making me blush. thank you for your kind words. *hugs* i miss hearing from you. e-mail me confetti: i am the lucky one for meeting a girl like her. she was the best thing in my life. thanks jenn: *raises a glass in a toast* i will toast to that. i hope she does too. it would mean the world to me. *hugs* and i hope i heal too. thank you for being there for me my friend. tara: thank you and yes i do know how you feel about this poem *hugs* glad you liked it. and thank you very much. suz: thank you very much my friend. *hugs* All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Well, Jesse, I have to say this one is one of your best. It stays clear and true and is very deep and moving. You poured your heart into this one and it shows, making this a great poem. Yours is a heart rare and golden, and this "special person" should take a really good look at your heart and think awful hard about it. Keep smiling, there's light out there somewhere With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Jesse, This poem is definately one of your best. I'm really glad you shared it with all of us. I hope when the time is right you find the queen that you deserve to be by your side in life. Dawn |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Awwwww, so beautiful Jesse J.... Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This is beautiful Jesse. I send you hugs my friend. I am glad to see you post in other forums. Your words from your heart tell of a good friend you are. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is such a special poem! --Beth Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping. |
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martina Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 59 |
jess you do an awsome job keep writing Martina |
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