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Open Poetry #13

Wonder if you Live

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-03-22 12:41 PM

Get off my cycle
And charge yourself gone
This world is pity
For pity’s sake
Some other station
That slings the truth
In visions of colored moods
That sail on silent waves.
You can’t discuss a thing
Because you do not live here
In the pain
Of everyday wonder
That snakes your mind
Capturing quiet glimpses
Of sanity lost
In arrogant sequences.
That you believe
Is just ducky
Let me shake
Your withering hand
That you’ve latexed up,
So much for emotion
And smile ignorantly
At your absurdness.
But, another inspection
Reveals you living
Your cold eyes glimmer
And you even breathe
Per chance you feel,
The next beat being foolish
But fools we are
And love is a funny game.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-03-22 02:38 PM

Well I'd rather think myself the fool than never feel...wonderfully written Michael

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

2 posted 2001-03-22 07:40 PM

Michael, amazing write. really.

Parker

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2001-03-24 02:53 PM

I could read your work a thousand times and never cease to be amazed with your talent.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-03-24 03:45 PM

Quite the uphill battle, isn't it....

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