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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-04-11 06:28 PM

True Mirror

there
is a mirror
inside
your head
reflecting all
you've done
and said
presenting
the ugly
and the beauty
demanded in
a sense of duty
yet
your face
is not
what others see
but
a true heart
is the key
so
be careful
what you do
and say
for
it is
the image
you portray

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

helen slicker

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-11-2001).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-04-11 06:36 PM

Helen~

Well written, excellent flow and rhyme, very wise words, I'll take them to heart

Take care,
Melissa~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-11 06:38 PM

words well written helen. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-11 06:43 PM

Very nicely written!

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

4 posted 2001-04-11 06:47 PM

All too true. Well written, enjoyed it muchly

~Becky~

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-04-11 07:09 PM

1 slick lady,

very true, great
insight

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2001-04-11 08:55 PM

Nicely said. I agree.

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

7 posted 2001-04-11 09:05 PM

Maybe it's the rain slowing me down today, but I had to read this three times before it worked in my head, and then, Eureeka! it said.
A TRUE mirror indeed.
Nice little write, Poet.

wg

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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

8 posted 2001-04-11 09:06 PM

No truer words have been spoken or better said... enjoyed reading!

-Tier

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

9 posted 2003-02-04 02:37 PM

EXCELLENT

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-04-21 03:50 AM

Yes

more folks should heed this!

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