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My goddess
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My goddess |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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In your eyes dwell the angelic hosts of heaven. Your hair cascades like the most majestic waterfalls as it falls to your shoulders Your body so perfect that Michaelangelo's sculpture pales in comparison Lips so lucious that your kiss could send a sinner's eyes toward heaven When you speak the heavenly creatures speak in one accord. Who can compare? Can I be so foolish to try to catch the eye of a goddess such as you. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
nicely expressed sentiments. ihope she listens and feels the same way  aloha Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Want some advise? No! Well here it is anyway - Go for it! Great job on this one, and sometimes what appears unobtainable is exactly the opposite. Well done, loved this. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a rare girl. Hope she sees you and your tender heart. Joyce |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you all! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Brad's in like.... this was wonderful! Show it to her! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Brad~ wow... to be adored like that.....she is lucky.... SEA. |
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