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Caressing
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Caressing |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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(In a simulation of Lady in White Style- It seemed a good way to convey these thoughts. I hope she is not offended) Caressing Cooling, crafting A scent sent A voice conveyed Softly displayed Sweetly entrée'ed Sweet breathe so moist Gives heart a voice Can you feel it too I hear it say "Love you today" yes it's ours to feel our love to steal a love from fate how long must we wait anticipate our first date create other meetings with such sweet greetings meetings on the sand kisses spread out so grand kisses on in the surf salt blue as a smurf taking us to eternity passing on to serenity falling, rising in waves we'll always be brave Nesting in pines Beds of needles divine Or on cliffs with a view We'll have so much to do Your voice soft Hot chocolate on ice cream Warming, blending us two Sundaes without end Our love does suspend Vanilla and fudge Needing no nudge We're in too deep Going on without sleep In tropical climes Without any chimes We hear "Yo te amo" It's no longer a blow But felt like a caress so I do not digress My poems are a success If ending, beginning Are a 'caress' Yet a postscript I'll devise one I hope you'll not despise as I witness feelings held Too long words I've not spelled Words I think you know I'm sure Like sweetest sugar refined pure You too know held lest rejection fear I walk off in dejection This poem rambles on and on It only speaks what I've been saying So many elements I've been praying How surrender will be sweet All the caressing - when we meet The first duty of love is to listen. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I love this. I love the smurf reference! Great job on this! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why Mr. Yeats, I am sure she will be thrilled when she sees this! Well done Sir! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
May I borrow from your list? You will have a full day  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
YES oh yes...and I am printing this one out to hang right by my bed "If you are going to walk on thin ice, you might as well dance!" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wil, touching poem done in fine style. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Thank you all so much - - I truly do appreciate your responses - - I'd like to think my poetry is 'evolving' as I myself evolve - I will be posting a number of poems I posted elsewhere in the past few years - - I ask that you contrast and compare - I did not choose to "evolve" but in some measure physical changes DO affect how I (we) respond and/or initiate aspects of our relationships - I MOST DEFINITELY would appreciate your perceptions in this light |
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