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Moon's Delight - Senryu Strings
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Moon's Delight - Senryu Strings |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Moon’s Delight - Senryus anticipation slipping by your eye sliding into sheets fascination churns mind racing to meet all that comes before dreaming soft dreams aftermaths of soft delight whispers greeting moon Luna comes again peeks in to see and she then slips softly away |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is gorgeous writing, you're on a roll!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautiful!  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you both - these are so enjoyable... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
lots of use of the word "slip," or a version thereof, today. Many uses and meanings Even luna languidly looking, languishing. Limpid, lustruos orb. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very, very nice and soft. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Lovely, enjoyed the read. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
will someone tell me if the moon is pulling unusually tight this month?? these seem to be a lot of these. . . but, they're all wonderful. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
The mistress of the Senryu conquors again - and I suggest no one here can match her talent - (do you get the message - how much I admire and appreciate? ~G~) |
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