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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Dust Of Words I released my soul from the attic of fear, unlocked my violins of courage poured it's very voice onto paper and recited the poetry of my heart yearning for love's enrapture, yet, gusts of laughter resounded with emptiness, echoes of mockery lowered verse to dust - fragments of nothingness unworthy sonnet of soul, tears now smudge the ink symphony on the page of me of what could have danced, bruised beyond recognition roses become crab grass beauty withers to beast, but, I'm okay, really... I'll just blow away with my words ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-10-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ this is like an arrow in the heart.....going deep into the soul.....hugs....  SEA |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
we will just have to add our tears to your dust, make mud of it and give you a facial... nicely done .. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Nicely done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Oh ... you cute little dust bunny - YOU !  Miz M~ ... this is really a nice piece. Love n' hugs ~*MommaDustBunny*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very good. Wonderful lines. Heart wrenching. Write on. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Melissa sweetie, this is an incredible write... Your expression is heartfelt and my compliments to you for a fantastic write... Hugs2UpoetFriend ~coco~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, an incredible write of depression...please don't blow away in the dust. May you receive a piece of this spring shower that is cleansing and empowering me this day...or is it the 3 cups of caffeine? No matter, lots is getting done inside, things that have needed doing for months, even! Enjoyed your poem, it is powerful in its message! May you receive as much power in exuberance to light up your day! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mellissa, Fine thoughts, fine words, fine write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just blow away the depression ok??? excellent Melissa. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I know this isn't going to help much, but I have been there too, and I know how that hurts as words are of your soul's creation. And you can't just blow them off, it takes time. This was an awesome piece, and one I am sure many can identify with. Very nicely done. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This surely touches ever poets soul..........so well done, so poignant, so beautiful........... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melybee, you just blew away any common-sense comment I could have made....first I was picking favorite lines.... then I was dustbowled away.... quit being so awesome for just a little while....let the rest of us catch up! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-11-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you all so much for such great replies and for your personal testaments, it does help!~ Margie - what a cute response Take care, Melissa~ |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, this is full of pain, but, never regret showing anyone who you really are, even if rejection is risked, your words and YOU are perfect just the way they are, listen to me for once |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
great! |
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