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Open Poetry #13

Dreaming

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

0 posted 2001-04-10 10:44 PM

So I live in a dream world
  it was  not any type of  plan
an ever changing reality
that's  the kind of man I  am.
Yes I am dreaming,
yes I am dreaming,
can you not see by the way I daze.
Yes I am dreaming,
yes I am  dreaming
Feel
the way I crave ,
Floating in the changing chasm,

watching right & wrong,
rearranging then a little waiting,
  passing through the throng;
Patterns plentifully surround me,
shaping then dissipating,
pictures perpetuating parodies
of parallel paradox,
of last time & the next;
Fixing worldly problems,
shouldered for to long ,

finding how they came here,
remembering where their from:

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-10 10:52 PM

                    "Feel
                    the way I crave ,
                    Floating in the changing chasm,"

I liked that part best.....neat poem

SEA

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-04-11 01:41 AM

Vivid ideas, but interesting poetry.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-04-11 02:39 AM

You have a romance with words. Joyce

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

4 posted 2001-04-14 03:34 AM

May i shoulder some with you ?

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