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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-03-25 06:57 AM

Patiently awaited dawning light,
Give pause and ease the end of night.
Revealing treasure darkness closed,
Dew dropped morning rain imposed.
Brighter still you reach your peak
Shadows old your eyes do seek.
Climb within the corners now
Force light inside, show us how.
If ever sought your praise in past
Show you now, the spell is cast.
Rise and cease the nightime air
Daytime breezes, with it scare.
If never once we loved in you
Dance us now in purity true.
Slake our thirst for light's glare,
For later night again ensnares.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-03-25 07:03 AM

quote:
If never once we loved in you
Dance us now in purity true.
Slake our thirst for light's glare,
For later night again ensnares.

the night... the time together... the beauty of it... so well portrayed and by such a viable poet.... i love the rhyme you are exploring.... please continue... more more more!!!!!..... oh... and good morning, my friend, jenn.....

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-03-25 07:07 AM

Doreen,
Thank you, Dear Lady!

It is an honor to have you enjoying my rhyme. I'm exploring and thinking of setting up my own rhyme colony! LOL!

Oh yes..and good morning to you too!

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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-03-25 07:15 AM

(((hugs))) the jonquils and crocuses are coming up!!!! wanna help me tend my garden? you really should visit this year, you know.... too many have gone by.....

hope you are well, my friend........ miss you

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-03-25 07:45 AM

Beautiful phrasing Jenn, such a lovely flow ... much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-03-25 07:51 AM

Thanks, Kit!

You're up early too, eh?

Right about now my stomache is rebelling against sleep.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-03-25 02:24 PM

wow. . . you're getting better at this rhyming stuff. . . I wonder what that means???

this is wonderful. . . I really like it. . .

and hey doreen. . . need any more help with that garden??? I'm good with weeds!!!

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