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If You Say Goodbye
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If You Say Goodbye |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
If you goodbye, Would you break my heart? If you say goodbye to me, If you say It's over, Would our love will remain the same? Would you call my name? Whenever If you feel the pain Inside, If you say goodbye, Would you think that the rain will ever come again? Shine our dreams away, If you say goodbye, Would you say love has eneded forever, And would bring my tears again? In my eyes, you would see How I feel for you , It would hurt me again, If you say goodbye, Would break my heart and heaven knows when I will meet you again, If time will be right.... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very nicely written but oh so sad!  I hope happiness come to you soon! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent vandana. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Always nice to read your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sometimes, the time is never right again. We wish and wish, but it cannot be. Nice write. Very sad though. All writing comes |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very emotional write from you Vandana....very nicely expressed SEA |
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