Open Poetry #13 |
For a Little Star |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
There in the nighttime sky I behold a little lonely star Where my thoughts of love reside Held aloft and brighter by far Ever the steady guiding light For a traveler through the storm How can something in the cold of night Be so distant, yet ever so warm No jewels upon Earth can measure Nor even be held in any compare For God so values this treasure Her light in Heaven He will forever bear Such a beautiful little star in the envious sky I shield her radiance from my undeserving eyes |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah! I have oft thought of stars being warm....and not cold, nor even distant, for I can lift my hand, and hold them.... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PK~ this is so loving and soft....and yes, me too, stars are warm SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Warm and fuzzy...but that's caused by refraction of light waves entering the earth's atmosphere...but, I digress. Thank you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful PK. . . no star is so small. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'How can something in the cold of night Be so distant, yet ever so warm No jewels upon Earth can measure Nor even be held in any compare' Beautiful writing, PK! I absolutely love this! sp to be with you... |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
I love stars! They are the most wonderful things to behold...but sometime I get caught up in the science of them and it spoils the moment. Your poem made me look out of my window...just look...no thinking. Thanks for that ~Becky~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
lucky star.......helen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
They seem so close, yet they are so far away. I love to gaze up at the night sky and lose myself in their wonder. Wonderful write! All writing comes |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
We have so many cloudy nights, It's alway a joy to look up and to see a skyfull of stars. Nicely done. Joyce |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I've really enjoyed reading this poem. It reminds me of many nights spent gazing and wishing upon the brightest star I could see.. -Robin |
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