Open Poetry #13 |
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Brother Sun Sister Moon - cojoined twins |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia ![]() |
![]() Brother sun Sister moon Coupled Together Since the dawn of time Reflections of the other images seen in tandem shadow and light two sides of the same coin two facets of the same space Without one The other does not survive Without the other The first has no Variance Twin radiance's Orbed in beauty In order To reveal the face of God Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Kethry...this is goregous! ![]() |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks SEA, I haven't written much lately so this was a nice surprise for me. Keth. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Simply beautiful! ![]() |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A nice surprise for us, too, Keth...welcome home! |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is great Kethry. . . a perfect addition to our little series. . . I'll be back. . . ![]() -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry sister of my heart, this is outstandingly beautiful, how utterly utterly fabulous. Always absolutely always your sheer amazing talent shines through. Oh how I love these Brother Sun Sister Moon series, you and AD are just soooooooo utterly perfect at them. You know I love this one don't you dearest sister, truly fabulous work Take care love as always and lots of warm slushy stuff thanks for the Easter gift love I really loved it be good but not too good Slushy ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Kethry, Nice read. Very nice. Panne |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ This is perfectly lovely ! Wonderfully, wonderfully written. 'two facets of the same space' I just love that thought ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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