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An Angel's Tongue Lashing
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An Angel's Tongue Lashing |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Oh, I don't know if I'm ready for this You see, my Guardian Angel is a bit miffed She said "OK sister, WE have things to discuss" And to me it looks like a long list She said "I've seen you slam a door or two Mumble under your breath but thought I didn't hear And a couple of times you even threw a shoe Now things have to change...is that clear" "Think before you speak and watch your actions And speak up if you have something to say About that shoe, you missed me by a fraction It's about time you kept that temper at bay" "I think I taught you better, but at your age You must have forgotten so let's refresh your mind If things don't set just right & your in a blue rage Just bite your tongue and those false teeth grind" "I promise the worse is about over And soon you will forget all if it Of course you can lean on my shoulder 'Cuz we'er both too old and its a nice fit" "I'm only telling you this for your own good Befor its too late to get you on the straight&narrow You can pratice and change all you should Just so your heart, body and soul aren't in peril" |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 I have no words to tell you how much I like this so smiles will have to do! [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-09-2001).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is just too cool I love this |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
If your guardian angel is miffed, mine must be furious! Many smiles here, too. Thanks! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
SEA, so glad you liked this. It is tough getting chewed out by an angel! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Brad, thanks. JLR, know how we can make them happy? Me neither. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think mine's sulking... my transgressions are too many to list! *G* Enjoyed this, ME. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
suthern, I've decided the old girl needs something to keep her busy! It might as well be me. This was fun. Thanks |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A very clever write! I enjoyed this, but, am afraid to hear what my angel has to say  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Melissa Honeybee, they can be so testy! but she is stuck with me. Thanks |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is great. . . but. . . I have a few things that I want to tell to my Guardian Angel. . . LOL  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Oh, I like this! Got me a chuckling ME. Thanks for that. Awesome write! ~Becky~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sven, go for it! Those angels are a tough lot! lol Beckalini, glad you had a good laugh! Thank you |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
See what happens when you bad mouth a butterfly Love you my mom! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Well, my butterfly, I guess "I" get told off. That is all right though, 'cuz then I know you are trying to hear me. Love and hugs, Mom |
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