Open Poetry #13 |
Blow |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Blow She only likes me when she's high. That's when she looks me in the eye and tells me I'm her best friend then I'll never see her again until she's stoned out of her mind then she'll give me a little of her time and make me believe all over again that she and I are best of friends. And still I feel I need so much more. For while the smoke blows I'm the man that she adores and as the smoke goes she slips right out the door. Jameslee@April09,2001 |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
This is so very softly written and the subtext so very serious. One must chose his priority. First sometimes or first always. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I used to have a houseful of 'friends' like that. It's hard sometimes to do what we should when it isn't what we want. Please don't let yourself get used up. Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
My ex-husband was the same exact way....when he was drunk or stoned I was the most beautiful girl in the world....and he was gentle to me....but sober....I was a punching bag and not pretty to him at all.....very sad....and painful...walk away James...you are so much more than you know.....you deserve better....hugs..SEA |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Excelent I love to nice poetry. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Leave and don't look back. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'll just tell myself that these are just words James. . . ok??? -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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