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Parker
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0 posted 2001-04-09 01:25 AM

Silence (in Rictameter)

Silence
The space between
Is empty of your words
Do we grow apart in this time
I send a wish of great luck for your quest
Keep your chin up high, don’t give up
I miss your touching gift
Email full of
silence

James Parker Haley April 9, 2001

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 04-09-2001).]

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

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1 posted 2001-04-09 04:27 AM

.................................................................................................................................................................................... ..................................Complet Silence

I love to nice poetry.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-04-09 07:30 AM

Parker~
Very nicely done -
with a little touch of lonely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2dalimit
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Mississippi coast

3 posted 2001-04-09 07:46 AM

I like the "anticipation" you have created, as well as the form.
Melton

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2001-04-09 09:00 AM

Parker~ Hey handsome

.....this is touched with sadness.....but I like it very much......

SEA

Sunshine

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5 posted 2001-04-09 10:25 AM

Parker!

Marina
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Pickering, Ontario

6 posted 2001-04-09 11:00 AM

I just knew you couldn't resist trying one!

They are fun and easy once you get the hang of it.

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

SEA

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with you

7 posted 2001-04-09 11:46 AM

now I think I'm gonna have to try these Rictameters too!!

SEA

Parker
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8 posted 2001-04-09 12:00 PM

Thanks everybody for replying..

These are fun and easy with tons more room to express yourself.... then haiku.

Parker

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

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missouri

9 posted 2001-04-09 01:16 PM

Beautifully lonely Parker...

"If you are going to walk on thin ice, you might as well dance!"
-Anonymous

Parker
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10 posted 2001-04-09 08:14 PM

Thank you paula.

Parker

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida

11 posted 2001-04-10 12:05 PM

Do we grow apart in this time
------remember me, and i'm not so far away

I send a wish of great luck for your quest
Keep your chin up high, don’t give up
--------your good luck wishes, and your encouragement mean the world to me,...thank you with all my heart!..

I miss your touching gift
--------i miss your voice..i miss the smile you bring to my face..i miss talking to you!

Email full of
silence
--------listen close and you can hear my voice...

you still move me....

hugs, g
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-stevie nicks

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 04-10-2001).]

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

12 posted 2001-04-10 09:11 AM

Ah Parker...I can't imagine anyone writing emials full of silence to you, there's enough expression in your words to keep anyone talking for a long time

Parker
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13 posted 2001-04-10 09:51 AM

dg, I know your still out there. Wondering around in the warm Florida weather.

I could use some wondering.

Hoot, so nice of you to drop in, I do miss your kind and sweet comments.

Parker

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida

14 posted 2001-04-10 11:33 AM

soon..i hope soon..you can come wander..

Corinne
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state of confusion

15 posted 2001-04-10 04:02 PM

A note, silence.

As loug as bagpipes.

Peace, Park.

Cor

Parker
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16 posted 2001-04-10 10:20 PM

Corinne.... are you offering me a piece..
well twist my arm.

Parker
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17 posted 2001-05-06 12:08 PM

dg, I missed replying to you here.... duh is me..

I'm getting into that wandering mode I am.

Parker

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