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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-25 12:59 PM

And So Again...

Once again I missed your call,
Or maybe there was none at all.
For message, I have not received
And into sleep, I now shall grieve,

To carry with me, miles I rode,
The clouded skies, the silence flowed,
As all alone, except for tunes
That sang my thoughts, in phase of moon.

Tempted I, to tempt you so,
But neither here nor there, did show.
I watched those walking towards me, each
And not a one was within reach.

It wasn't you that came to me.
My wishes were just fantasy.
And so again, I take to night
To dream again, tomorrow's plight.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-25-2001).]

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-03-25 01:13 AM

What a wonderful rhythm and flow Maureen ... lovely sentiments, very much enjoyed this beautiful piece!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-03-25 02:08 AM

And does it seem
the lonesome launch
into the dream
comes not again
up with the steam
to turn the milk
into the cream?

But try we must
when late at night
in dream to trust
we gather up
the wish robust
if not in love
at least for lust.

dream on, Wynter,
Krawdad

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-03-25 03:43 PM

Thank goodness for our dreams. At least for a few hours we're not alone.
Loved the flow of your poem.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-25 06:45 PM

and when dreams come. . .

wonderful Wynter. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-03-26 07:18 AM

Kit
thank you, I try to have a flow but lately I have been writing a lot of free style...somedays it just happens and others..well..

Krawdad
hmmmmm but I don't dream of lust...at least I don't think I do...*s thank you

inot2B
yes dreams do keep me night company and day if I am napping too

Sven
sometimes I wonder why we dream, but i sure won't ever question it when it happens... thank you *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

6 posted 2001-03-26 09:30 AM

You always give me a stir when I read your poems, and this was no exception. I loved the dream imagery.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-03-27 07:44 AM

a stir...I think I like that for a title..but done this way...Astir...be looking for it

thank you PK

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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