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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-04-08 06:28 PM

The Sound of Falling

I know there
was sound,
but could you hear
the falling of
a briny iridescent
orb as it slid from
the mud puddles
of my pleading
vision,

to the
swollen ruby
banks where you
placed your
whispers against
last night...
then

fall
fall
fall

landing atop
a swollen, rising
blush to roll
so very
s l o w l y
to the hardened
peak ... And
linger

I know there
was sound...
Why didn't you hear
......the invitation

"...I am a river in winter,quiet in the eyes of most butdeep,swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice."
Watercouse by: Sno

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-08 06:40 PM

Very interesting read!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-04-08 06:40 PM

Wow! This is fantastic!! Love this

SEA

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2001-04-08 08:06 PM

Very interesting and imaginative writing.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-08 10:21 PM

Very intriguing write, Snow.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-09 07:06 PM

This is just too cool! I loved it!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2001-04-09 07:08 PM

Very well written piece of verse. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2001-04-13 12:29 PM

thank you for taking the time
to read and reply..

snow

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

8 posted 2001-04-13 04:53 PM

I also loved it...

Kay
Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 70

9 posted 2001-04-13 06:12 PM

I felt as though I were truly free-falling!

Kay
Let no one who loves be called unhappy. Even love unreturned has its rainbow." ~James M. Barrie~

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