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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-08 11:26 AM

I will love you
in strong embrace
As the moon
Softly bathes your face

I will love you
Rythmic’ly, ever so slowly
Whispering in your ears
Lowly

I will love you
With passion hot
And your desire
Will leave you not

I will love you
Body and soul
With abandon
Yet in control

I will love you
And then once more
I will love you
From my source core.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-10-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-08 12:22 PM

Interloper~

you have given me a smile to wear all day!!( I have to go cut wood....

) Thank you so much for this...it's beautiful and in my library

SEA

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-04-08 02:09 PM

wow

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-08 02:30 PM

wow. . . this is amazing. . . superb. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-04-08 03:33 PM

SEA....is quite fortunate!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-04-08 10:30 PM

SEA ~ Then my work is well done.

Irish Rose ~ Colleen, you honor me.

Sven ~ Coming from you, my friend, that is the pentultimate compliment. Thank you.

Sunshine ~ You do me honor. I can only bow to your superiority of verse .. and love you for it.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

TLee
New Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 2

6 posted 2001-04-08 11:31 PM

This was so well written it brought a tear to my eye. It makes you wish for a love like this.

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

7 posted 2001-04-09 12:13 PM

Beautifully written. Very nice read.

Red

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

8 posted 2001-04-10 04:18 PM

so very, very lovely....

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

9 posted 2001-04-10 04:34 PM

you will??? well, all right!!! very very cool!!!!....

sounds wonderful to me!! *grin

.... very fine writing......
delicate, sincere, dynamic, and with a meter and cadence and flow that pulls it together seemlessly

zoe
Junior Member

since 2001-02-05

Posts 34

10 posted 2001-04-10 05:21 PM

wow........swoon.....*picking me up from the floor* wow.....perfectly written

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

11 posted 2001-04-10 05:22 PM

oh my.....*swooning with other aforementioned poets* this is wonderful...will have to read more of you

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

12 posted 2001-04-10 05:44 PM

With abandon yet in control... I LOVE that line. Truly sensual, romantic and beautiful, great job!

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

13 posted 2001-04-10 05:47 PM

Truly excellent work.

Sensual in its tenderness.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

14 posted 2001-04-11 12:30 PM

Very lucky woman.

[This message has been edited by BrightStar (edited 04-12-2001).]

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