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Open Poetry #13

``````Shark Haiku

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-08 10:58 AM

Shark swims the oceans
searching for prey without rest
staring with dead eyes

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-04-08 11:17 AM

excellent, right-on
about a shark,
especially the last line

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

2 posted 2001-04-09 02:19 PM

Stark reality.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-09 02:21 PM

I have always thought a shark's eyes were "dead"....

glad to know I was right!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-09 03:42 PM

I have to agree this is excellent, and having seen a shark up way too close, their eyes are exactly as you describe. Well done!

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-04-09 04:09 PM

This is really excellent!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-04-09 08:21 PM

Dead eyes...Geesh...
I enjoyed this. I say that there are MANY kinds of sharks out there.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

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