Open Poetry #13 |
Love Me Or Set Me Free |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~*~ Love Me Or Let Me Free ~*~I swing in the garden’s gentle breeze, In the light of a full moon. Under a tiara of stars, I am the purest of truth and body. A kindred spirit needing To be awakened to love. ~*~ Come closer ~*~ Take my hand, hold it. With it, I give myself to you. ~*~ Be gentle ~*~ I offer you my heart. Will your heart swing with me? A metronome of love awaits us. I want to give myself to you. Look carefully into my soul, For a heart of truth and, loves lies there. Gently take me, Explore, feel, smell, Taste my essence. Enter my body and, Explore me, experience me, Let me explore you. I have nothing to hide. No hidden secrets, no shame. Know me, love me, But only if you can, Promise me this, ~*~ Love me ~*~, For who and what I am. If not, ~*~ set me free ~*~ Art: ~* Reveries *~ (1913) By: Maxfield Parrish (1870-1966) ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ © Copyright 2001 All Rights Reserved ~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"Under a tiara of stars I am the purest of truth and body a kindred spirit needing to be awakened to love Will your heart swing with me? A metronome of love awaits us Love me for who and what I am if not set me free" ========================== Beautiful, wonderful imagery and phrasing!! Most women desire this, and should accept no less! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mysteria....you are outdoing yourself, and the rest of us..... well done my friend.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I swing in the garden’s gentle breeze, In the light of a full moon. Under a tiara of stars, I am the purest of truth and body. A kindred spirit needing To be awakened to love. ============================ beautiful imagery laced emotions Mysteria .. and served up with your wonderful presentation of art and music. passionate expressions here...well done. oh you speak to me in riddles |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Amen! Enjoyed the message and way of this. If I wasn't so tired of whining...I might have said more. Not really...that is just so funny. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mysteria, I knew from the beginning you were a swinger! This poem really says it all. I think that's what all of us really want...just to be loved for what and who we are. You express that in a beautiful way..... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Melissa ~*~ I agree, but it works both ways, anyone who actually believes they can change someone is dreaming! Thank you. Sunshine ~*~ You are too kind and sure know how to "poof me fedders" however, I am just getting the hang of this writing business, so I thank you. Janet Marie ~*~ I have equal passions for art and the written words, so I like combining them, and I thank you for your kind acceptance. JLR ~*~ Now you are the funny one, and I detect some tongue in cheek there, buy a blank sign, and put on it "No whining allowed", let me know how you do - Balladeer ~*~ So nice to see you read something I did, and like too - what a bonus! Yep ~ I am afraid I am a swinger, and by the way I forced the first line to make it all tie together, naughty. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written Mysteria, and the image compliments your words so perfectly! Lovely flow, with such tender and delicate sentiments. I very much enjoyed this wonderful render! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kit: Thank you - actually I stare at a work of art, and try to figure out what the character or item is thinking and go from there, but I do thank you for the compliment, but it is the art that makes me look decent! Thanks for reading. ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i agree with your poem wholeheartedly,Love me as i am or set me free,this is true and enjoyable |
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