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Fallen Beams |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Fallen Beams ~*Marge Tindal*~  Across the streams of yesterday fallen beams of short-lived dreams became the pathways stepping-stones taking me across the river of regret to mend a friendship breached long ago leading me where I haven't been yet ... yet back to where I should go Light of hope falls in front of me casting shadows where I've been Stepping so lightly across your beams seeking the glow of a long-lost friend Suddenly before me a doorway opens Your smile spreads as wide as your arms Folding me in with gentle chiding "I've missed you, friend." "Where ya' been hiding ?" ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have certain friends [my fortune I have more than some] that share with me the passing of days, weeks, months....when suddenly we are calling, writing, seeking each other.... constantly....ESP....moon's dance....perchance.... but I never question it....I just hug them... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Outstanding and oh so very true. |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Marge, another one to pull at us and maybe make a few phone calls. . . Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ And that is just as it should be ... Forever starts with a hug ! *Hug* Mysteria~ Friendships on forever-bridges - constantly crossed on well-worn paths ... *Hug* HM3~ To even hope that you might be stirred to call a long-lost friend makes me understand why I felt the need to post this one. Thank you. *Hug* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Good poem and how wonderful to fin an old friend. Joyce |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
marge, lovely, I'll take your advice |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ And the joy is in renewing an old friendship. Thanks for the reply. Chelsea~ Well ... thank you, dear. It is good advice ... I even took it myself ! Most gratifying. Thanks for letting me know you'll try it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
this reflects the beauty of your heart, my friend. Absolutely beautiful poem. Outstanding! "taking me across the river of regret to mend a friendship breached long ago leading me where I haven't been yet ... yet back to where I should go" I love this! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Thank you, hon. Friends of our making are so treasured - we need to travel their paths often. *Hug* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--True friendship is one that takes up where it left off...even though time has moved...it is like time stood still. Thanks for reminding me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ And you are SO right ... All the yesterday's come to play in the loving arms of friendship. Thanking you for yours ! *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
HOW IMPORTANT FRIENDSHIP BECOMES LOVELY WRITE THE DOOR TO THIS LODGE REMAINS OPEN WARRIOR |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ My sweet and wonderful ~Warrior~ ... I know that I can always find warmth at the hearth of your heart. You are the smoke that engulfs me in messages of great light. I love you, my always and forever friend. *Hugs* ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I love this, Marge. I also await the return of a friend. Thank you for this. Michael Proust- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Aww, yes, Margie, this is beautiful, true friendship should be like this!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ I'm so glad that you caught this one - May your heart be overjoyed in the return of your friend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa, love~ I'd know the way to your door - blindfolded. Love ya', gal~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge!! Lovely indeed!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ahhh, Denise~ Where ya' been hiding ?  Love ya', gal ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this one very much, Marge! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ I hear ya' knocking ... COME ON IN !  Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
wonderful message, Marge, good friends are so important... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TradeWind~ If we let each friend be a good friend - then even one is too treasured to lose. Thank you so much for the read and reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 04-08-2001).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, am I simply to call you friend? Nay say sister, sister of my heart and always I'd know the path to you and you will always have a place here in me. Love you always sister mine. That's true life is far too short to lose one friend, this reminds me of the saying a stranger is friend you haven't met yet. You have a million friends dear Margie girl, because they love you, as do I! Take care sweet sister, love and lots of warm stuff Mushy  Did I forget to say this is outstanding, always so beautifully written love, you are superb, as a sister, a friend and as a poet. And you're a truly awesome person too, love you, now I'll fly out of here, to return as and when I can. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aww, this is SOOOOOO beautiful! Your writing is so wonderful to read.  Sauni Sauni :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Marsha~ You are all that forever friendship entails ... and I love you dearly ! Thank you for being YOU and for lighting in my heart. *HUGS* Saunni~ I thank you so sincerely. It is pure pleasure for me to share my heart with friends like you. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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