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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You want me to let you in but I'm not sure that I can, you wish that I could trust you but first I must know this man. You say that you want to spoil me and melt this icey heart of mine, but I fear the ice is to thick and I fear what you might find. You say that you'll be patient you know that you can break through, and that someday I will see that all of these things are true. I told you the walls were up you said you could tear them down, and on my face a smile will come when you take away my frown. You have no way of knowing just what this heart has been through, you say that it does not matter I've already fell in love with you. Your wrong, it really does matter this ice does not easily melt, yes, it will only start thawing when I know true feelings are felt. You say, it does not matter it will thaw in passing of time, that you'll someday have a home built into this heart of mine. You say that you care enough to wait for me patiently, the door to my heart will open when your love I finally see. I do not know if your right I do not know if your wrong, you say it does not matter it is time for our love song.... (Another almost year ago memory....I'm full of memories today......*s*) On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Its time for our love song--- what a great romantic line, Lovely poem! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In the telling, the walls may crumble... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I hope that you heard the song. . . wonderful poem GS. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
beautiful... we can always move on, but it certainly is hard to forget what got ya here... you know what i mean right? the spiel about what don't kill us an all. aww, no you're makin my memories come to the top...  good words. superb an simple flow. You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. - Frank Sinatra "For a dreamer, night's the only time of day" [This message has been edited by Ethan Halo (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can relate to this right now and think it beautiful enough to save in my library, Donna huggzz..hope all is well with you Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you Walker, it sure is a pretty song! Sunshine, I think the walls crumble a little more each day. *s* Not only did I hear Sven, but I'm still listening. Thanks Ethan, I know what you mean. *s* I'm glad that you can relate M. I am pleased to be a part of your library. Hope you are well too Wynter. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I do not know if your right I do not know if your wrong, you say it does not matter it is time for our love song....' Ahh, yes...with a love like that, the walls have no choice but to crumble! Beautiful write, GS! sp  to be with you... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
And they crumble a little more each day. Thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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