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Take it away........(repost)
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Take it away........(repost) |
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K2001 Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31Near manchester in England |
Oh no...here we go... Struggle...fight...fall to the floor. Evil eyes deep and dead. Contamination fills my head. Chilling touch..... Hurts so much. This contant game of inner fear, how do i make it dissappear? Taking pleasure from my pain. Never stopping, always the same. Lye down. Go to sleep. Close my eyes. Count the sheep. Be a fairy in a far off land. Try to forget the touch of your hand. Warm beer breathe allover my face. Tears of silence...fear....disgrace. Stealing everything.Mind...Body....Soul. Gratification, your only goal. I dont matter, I dont count. I am not what this is about. Take me away. Take my life. Please i beg you friendly knife. Give me blood to make this right, Im too tired now to fight. Cut me deep. Release the bad. Take away the life ive had. "Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
this is a very good write, it spoke to my soul...yeah this is da shkit../Drew/ |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Whoa! this was so deep. this is awesome. you have some really really good writes on here! you should publish your stuff. LadyPeach1 |
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K2001 Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31Near manchester in England |
Thank you ladypeach....you have made me smile....but i dont think im good enough to start publishing yet! "Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
This was too good!! I agree with LadyPeach - you should publish... I already have 3 of my poems published, I didn't think they were good enough but the publisher did. Your own work is always better than you tihnk it is...  What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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