Dark Poetry #3 |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
The lonelyness reeks threw my body I can't think And I don't think About anything but you I am scared for you How long you have left? I don't know how I will survive without you You held my whole life in your hands What do I have without you -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
that was awesome. it's the first thing of yours i've read, and i know how you feel. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
This is the first I've read of you also and I'm impressed, this is a fine piece I hope I see more./Nick/ |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Thanks....it has been a while since I have posted I use to be here a lot but then I left for a while. Hopefully I stay. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Great work neala & welcome back LOVE ELMO <3 |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
Such sadness......but the poem was wonderful in that sadness James |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
i felt every word..this was da [edit]../Drew/ [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good expression of nothing...James |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
also a first, but amazingly magnetic! |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Thanks everyone for replying. -Neala |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I replied to this earlier but it got lost in cyberspace somewhere I guess... I can't remember everything I said so I will leave it short - Very powerful. Been tere myself... Thanks for the great read!! What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
what can i say?.. im kinda obsessed with sadness.. but i enjoyed reading this one.. thanks, neala.. |
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