Dark Poetry #3 |
Now, A Plea (just being me...) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
just for you, rhymes in time, long overdue... I heard of whispers in the dark, and romps of dreams and sting of spark, Tales of shivers up the spine and tongues that taste of aged wine... fingertips to feather--chilled, loveliness of love fulfilled, Rumors, have I heard of this-- to taste a soul upon the lips... I listen for the answers true, and weep because I'm missing you... each idea, a new thing born, shared with you, and left forlorn. did not believe, 'til I met you, and you did leave. A prison now of memory... a prisoner you've made of me. Once more, please, just wipe my tears, still my shaking calm my fears... If it's but a night of free... oh come with me, pretend, I'll be as close to her I can achieve, for you, I'd give up being me. *and? I would like to introduce myself as your new deputy moderator....sort of like Barney Fife with a sharpie? grin...now let's have some fun, yes????* [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-28-2001).] |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Well then welcome Ms. Fife! Mags BTW great read! I really enjoyed it as it made its path into my thoughts for the day! Don't fear your tears! |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
this is da shkit...yes it is...it touched me here, not so much here or here but here.../Drew/ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Another fantastic write from you Sweet Serenity. AND.... Congratulations! wahooo Dep Mod. Well Done Me Sista! Hugs and love Maree |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Very well written!! And Howdy Ms. Fife!! LoL What don't kill you can only make you stronger... Love you, Adam!! [This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 07-31-2001).] |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I liked the first verse, loved the second - and wept with the understanding of the last two lines. This is superb. |
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Sheilan Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 50Snohomish, WA |
I am so moved I can barely bring myself out of the abyss your words created in my heart. The deepest emotions usually only show themselves through my pen and paper...surely if you could see them - the tears running freely down my cheeks say it all... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Well hello, Serenity the DM. Being the slacker I am, I haven't read any of your work. This is such a crime because you write really well! Yup, let the beatings for being slack begin. It flowed awesomely and your ending was great. Most endings are really crappy but yours was quite good. Thanks for the read. I WILL be looking out for more. ~AF~ "Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams |
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