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Look into my eyes
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Look into my eyes |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
look into my eyes... is it a desolate wasteland flying devils and demons mass destruction and killings evil and death bringing executioners an entire world of decaying flesh a darkness that is alive and entrapping screams for life over death slow and painful torcherings is it only death you see or is it heavenly sanctuaries angels drifting in heavens wind divine and annoited angels quiet peace and life an entire world of open love a light that sooths and calms a life of love and bliss praises to the one on high what do you see? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
Hmmm is the world of yours really so cruel that you see devils amongest the angels? Perhaps there is decils whirling in our words, whispering our thoughts, but control they do not unless you let them free. The read was as I expected... great /Nick/ |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Very dark...  I like your words but bot so much of the "fleshy" stuff... make sense?  |
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