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To Live A Life With Him
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To Live A Life With Him |
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Tasin Ray Junior Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 11TX, USA |
Sing the songs that still can sing All the ones still loitering Anything and everything It's music to my ears Cry the words that droop in tears Forget your trouble and your fears Everything throughout the years Tests you day by day Cherish this what makes life be And see all there is to see For soon you will be set free To live a life with Him. "In this very breath that we take now lies the secret that all great teachers try to tell us." |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
The feeling that one day we will be united with Him is a beautiful feeling yes and such a way to exprees it espeacialy in the last 2 stanzas, thats how i feel anyway. Great Work. /Nick/ |
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Tasin Ray Junior Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 11TX, USA |
After recently losing a good friend of mine, it is very refreshing to write about God and religion and happiness. Mainly because i have seen a lot of people remain sour over a death, there's no going back to save the person. Accept life as life goes and accept death as death comes. Thanks for the kind words DarkenedShadow. "In this very breath that we take now lies the secret that all great teachers try to tell us." |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
ahh yes the unquestionable phrase of "him"....very good write, it the [edit]......./Drew/ [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Very good... |
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